Your Majesty!
Our chief skywatcher - Kalitastr has told me that the next month is going to be pretty favourable as the skies will be very clear with all stars plain to see. So, Kalitasr suggests constructing a special navigational device — astrolabe- which would help your Hero with bearing while his travels. This would decrease duration of our combat missions. One thing is that the construction will cost us 1000 Black Gems. Make your decision 'cause we have lack of time to start construction.
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Your Majesty!
Our chief skywatcher - Kalitastr has told me that the next month is going to be pretty favourable as the skies will be very clear with all stars plain to see. So, Kalitasr suggests constructing a special navigational device an astrolabe- which would help your Hero with bearing while he travels. This would decrease duration of our combat missions. One thing is that the construction will cost us 1000 Black Gems. Make your decision because we have limited time to start construction.
The he when speaking of the hero should probably be for both sexes as well, not just his or he.