my lvl7 annuhilation

[PROCELLA]

https://prnt.sc/1rpmiuw

The seers had been clear, the monsters were preparing something impressive ... and their hero Funkayel had been spotted several times by Countess Blocken's explorers in the territories around the capital ...
The great council of heroes of Ost-In-Edhil met to decide the best strategy and close the hordes of Funkayel with a pincer maneuver and massacre them, leaving the head of the monster hero impaled on a pike in memory of the battle that shortly it would come and as a warning to all the monsters en route to the kingdom.
The Marchioness Yanus, the most skilled strategist in the kingdom, volunteered herself to carry out the arduous mission supported by much of the council; here came however the Countess Blocken who claimed her right to track down and kill Funkayel as a pledge for all the elven victims she left dead in the field in her numerous search and kill missions against the corrupt Funkayel hordes.
The council fully supported the act of courage of the expert huntress and approved ... now it remained only to find the ignoble monster ... Funkayel thanks to his corrupt and evil powers, had sensed that something great was in preparation for him, and found refuge near the ruins near Ost-In-Edhil ready to launch the most powerful of the attacks against the capital. Fortunately, the gods were benevolent and gave the chief seer Lady Ashura that little advantage of uncovering Funkayel's evil plans a little in advance.
There was no more time to waste, the time had come to anticipate the enemy and face him on his own territory even at the risk of many elven lives but the capital could have capitulated under the blows of the hordes of monsters and reveal to the world some secrets that it is best to keep hidden.
With the few troops at the disposal of Countess Blochen and with the help of arcane elven magic, the attack was launched in no time at all.
Funkayel seemed taken aback but his wickedness was known throughout the kingdom and it wasn't going to be an easy battle; the fight was bloody, the monsters do not know pity and correctness, but the magic of light is the most powerful known and helped the elven troops not without many fallen on the field, to defeat the evil hordes and save the capital and the its secrets for a long time to come ...
Funkayel's head, as promised, has been staked on a pike and placed as a warning on a hill so that all can see it and desist from endangering the kingdom of Ost-In-Edhil.

[manticora]

Such a riveting story!

[FJCH]

Congratulations and thank you for your story! However, it needs some further improvements. The story has to be vivid and interesting. Your story lacks pictures, please consider working on the main characters a little more.