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 Post subject: arch-ruin 05-12-2017
PostPosted: 06 Dec 2017, 07:42 
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Joined: 25 Mar 2016, 11:31
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the gates of the castle had been closed and the army had retired to rest after a very tiring day when an ally's messenger was angry at the gate of the castle! coming into the castle, you had sent a letter to the Emperor! in the letter was the report of the spies from a ruin, but it was not from a normal ruin, but from an archi- ruin. The report was written in several lines that sounded like this: this arch-ruin has invaded the territory, there are many monsters in it, as you can see in the report, I invite you to help me destroy it !! as you see the reward is a fairly large 26654 pearls!
the Emperor had ordered the marshal to prepare for a historic attack, and to inform the soldiers that they would give the greatest battle of their lives!
the Marshal had done all the preparations he had ordered to take the best weapons and the magicians said it was time to prove their skill! had put the garrison in the kingdom where the ruin was established the road was long and very tiring, !!
arrived at the spot found that the ruin was very large and had a very strong monster hero.
or made a lot of calculations, the wizards made the most of the devastation and spells for all the soldiers, increasing the life and the power of attack and defense, finally the armed forces headed by the two marshals, or heavy fighting, were two fights in which the blood flowed from both camps, but eventually healers or proved very skillful by treating the soldiers' wounds so the troops did not suffer great losses, instead monsters perished with all.
the armies returning victorious, glorifying the gods of these lands, knowing that they will remain in the history of these lands forever and ever, reaching the castles of the two armies, ordered to prepare a great feast in honor of the two armies who managed to destroy an arch the ruins that the gods of these lands were invited to. They hoped there would be occasions of such feasts.

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 Post subject: Re: arch-ruin 05-12-2017
PostPosted: 08 Dec 2017, 10:48 

Joined: 27 Jan 2015, 03:10
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Congratulation on the great feat! Well done! Your story however needs further improvements. It appears too short. Please add more details to the description of the battle.
Please attach also all the pictures, like you did with the picture f7kU_6FOQNW1C6wlmFiUjQ.png

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