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 Post subject: Arch-Ruin 10-4-2017
PostPosted: 19 Apr 2017, 14:15 
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One day an elven chief who was busy trying to keep the tribe's explorers safe and on task because with so many monsters lurking about it was very important that they all stay alert. Another thing keeping this cheif elf very busy was training the army of warriors to be big and strong in hopes of being one of the greatest armies of the kingdom.
So, one evening at 1954, as one group of tired explorers came in with news of what they had found, one particular explorer was very excited and could barely contain himself. So when it was his turn he ran up and gave the news of what his group had found. It was a great and ancient ruin. The biggest of its kind, long and forgotten and full of thousands of gems!! The cheif elf could see the other elves were getting very excited and almost couldn't contain themselves.
After our Visionaries reported that no one was coming or going from the Legendary Arch Ruin, hundreds of spies were sent to see what was in this great Arch ruin. It was important to know what the army would be up against and so everyone would be prepared for the fight.
But still being a small army the chief elf knew that assistance was needed to kill all the monsters and get to the gems. So through coordination with a great allied knight's army and the elf's chief's own army, the battle was set and soon to commence.
At 2107 the two allied armies guided by their heroes started the battle and the calvary rushed towards the monsters, while the archers took down the flying monsters and the rest of the troops followed with the attack. The monsters tried to resist the attack but they were no match for the force of the allied armies and they were completely annihilated in just one round. There were some losses from the allied armies but thanks to the help of the healers they were brought back to life and they all went back home victorious and with a great treasure.


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 Post subject: Re: Arch-Ruin 10-4-2017
PostPosted: 20 Apr 2017, 06:19 
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Congratulation on the great feat! Well done! Your story however needs further improvements. It appears a little too short. Please add more details to the description of the battle. You may combine your stories and post only one. The story will count for both players.


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 Post subject: Re: Arch-Ruin 10-4-2017
PostPosted: 24 Apr 2017, 01:04 
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Thank you!
I added some more details to the story. I hope it meets the requirements of the quest.


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 Post subject: Re: Arch-Ruin 10-4-2017
PostPosted: 08 May 2017, 08:41 
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Unfortunately, your story is still too short. For inspiration you may read previous stories of other players.
For example:
viewtopic.php?f=25&t=165
viewtopic.php?f=25&t=445


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