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PostPosted: 22 Jun 2014, 10:25 
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Arros was seated in the tavern...As everyday, it was the best place to dream and make a point.
His Master : Albator offered him a nice and large throne. With the time completly covered by crystals Yellow, green, purple, red and blu ...sign of a lot of successful battles against agressiv ruins !!!!

More than one year now that our army was growing... battles were difficults at the beginning with Hero Manana. Most of Soldiers lost friends.....
But everything changed when Arros was hired. One year later, the motivation was at the maximum. Agressives Ruins R5 and 6 were frightened when earing the sound of our army coming for them.....
But for Arros, he no longer needs to prove his competence ...... Now is dream is to Kill an agressiv Ruin level 7 !!!!

Everyday,he was waiting the explorers's reports ... days after days ..... weeks after weeks ... months after months .... but
The 22th of June, his patience was granted ...... this day needs to be his consecration !!!

He immediatly sent spies on site. they reported only a lot of noise but no real information.. then Impossible to define the real size of this monsters army but it was the dream of his life and his army was well trained now.

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Hi my army !!!!
Today I promise you to be known in all America....we waited for this day and it comes !!!!!
The most Agressiv ruin you never saw is near our Kingdom...we can't let it growth and take the risk to see ennemy army coming on our territorry to try to catch the treasure.

I always drive you safe to battle and today willn't be an exception (I hope !!!) !!!
"Prepare your sword and clean your shield". "For this Epic Battle, Warner's army will join our forces to run to the victory..."

After more than 2h of walk, the battlefield appears....
A river of blood was flowing, sign of a previous defeated army ......

But it was to late to cancel the fight.
Arros gave the signal.
After the longest battle of his lafe, the victory was here...A minimum lost of troop confirmed him that alliance was the best idea and decrease the a potential retreat.


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Arros won the battle but some monsters survive. He spent some time to find Berros the Monster Hero of this ruin.
When he found it, green blood was ranning down his body.....wtill alive but wanted to exchange his treasure for a Horse.
Arros answered...I have only my sword for you and .... thrusted it in Hero's heart.

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Army did his work ... carriers have to do the last part of the mission... carry the gold for all the army, other ressources and more important the biggest treasure he never saw .... 39145 BP ... Albator, his master will be happy of his work.

Albator's notoriety was thereby confirmed...All taverns related the fight. and congratulations came from everywhere....


Then I did a R7 ... now can be your turn !!!


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PostPosted: 22 Jun 2014, 13:11 
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A true and a very good story

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PostPosted: 23 Jun 2014, 18:35 
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I think the admins will ask you to write more 'meat' to your " Epic Tale of the Great Deed " if you know what I mean.
Role-play some story up and have fun with a little imagination -- whip something up and add it to the post so they will credit you!!

At any rate, congratulations on the Arch Ruin! :mrgreen:

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PostPosted: 27 Jun 2014, 03:55 
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Hello,
We congratulate the players upon annihilation of an Arch-Ruin and winning 78290 Black Gems, but the story itself need to be further elaborated.


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PostPosted: 17 Jul 2014, 03:49 
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Story improved


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PostPosted: 25 Jul 2014, 04:17 
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Hello,

Your story however needs further improvements. It appears a little too short.


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